WALT:use varied sentence beginnings and lengths What I did well was using describing words I think next time I will use more information
Bleached weatherboards cried. Doors left standing for 2 years no one was caring for the house.Torn patches of old newspaper fell spouting hung from the roof it sounds like the all blacks are playing rugby from the ceiling but there not its possums and mice fighting over something. Long grass grew and grew getting taller and taller.Water dripped from the ceiling creating a puddle.
Monday, 8 September 2014
in a flash
Hardly GET IT GET IT !!!!!!
Posted by DAYANAH at 11:11