Thursday, 11 September 2014

The House

WALT:use varied sentence beginnings and lengths What I did well was using describing words I think next time I will use more information

Screenshot 2014-09-11 at 10.03.01.pngBleached weatherboards cried. Doors left standing for 2 years no one  was caring for the house.Torn patches of old newspaper fell spouting hung from the roof it sounds like the all blacks are playing rugby from the ceiling  but there not its possums and mice fighting over something. Long grass grew and grew getting taller and taller.Water dripped from the ceiling  creating a puddle.

Monday, 8 September 2014

My flow chart



Adjectives
Nouns
Verbs
Adverb
Sore
Hands
gripping
Tightly
Long Agile
Leg’s
stepping
quickly
Long
Arm’s
swang
in a flash
Red
Face
Sweeting
Fastly
Happy
Felling
Running down
Longley   finely
Shouting
Players
calling
loudly
Yelling
Coach’s
Screaming
Hardly GET IT GET IT !!!!!!



Monday, 1 September 2014

Equal addition

WALT:use equal additions to solve subtraction problems what I really did well on page 3 was getting the right questions I think I need to learn some more maths.