Wednesday, 22 October 2014

Magical house

With mrs Nicloa we had to write a magical story
Magical House

One day there was a man called luke and a girl called lucy they were brother and sister  as they were walking the sun shone on them  then they came across a rental house. Hey look said lucy It’s  a magical house that says It’s a magical house made of lollies when you eat the lollies they grow back!!!! WOW ….. Luke and Lucy came up with a plan there plan was to make a cake store.lots of people lined up at the cake store. Luke and lucy was so so happy.After they had finished they made $100 each which was $200 dollars plus they had $1900 dollars.Luke and lucy had gone back to the owner we have got it $2100 dollars for you. Luke and Lucy were so so happy to move into the house when they got there all they did was eat lollies

1 comment:

  1. Hey Dayanah, well done. I like your story. At the very start of your story you have to put a capital letter at the start of a sentence. You have to put a space in between the thousands and hundreds. That's a lot of money $2 100. Besides that Ka mau te wehe kotero.